"The review isn't offensive if it's underdeveloped."

Is this kind of like what ovdeath said?

lol that lyric quote, now i gotta listen to this

edit: wowwwwwwwwwwwww those are bad

The lyrics? I mean they're cheesy but I got a kick out of them.

Album Rating: 2.5

This isn't bad, went in expecting brilliance from some of the early reviews. At times it's corny beef thrash

Yeah but I guess I tend to expect little from thrash so this just felt a notch above normal thrash even in its corny moments

Album Rating: 2.5

This isn't really that objectionable of a review, but your first paragraph starts things off on a bad foot. Consider adding a fuller introduction that doesn't have so much of an emphasis on conclusions; as a whole, it's a paragraph that doesn't belong where it's currently positioned. Providing a bit of background and a general introduction to the album's overall purpose and construction would serve you well.



Also, the word you're looking for is "typical," not "atypical."

Alright, I edited the review. Any better or should I add/fix anything else?

Album Rating: 2.5

Needs more dog

Um, what?

he said it needs more dog

Will any dog variety do?

Album Rating: 2.5

It's a Simpsons joke about red tick beer :3

Ok don't gun me down but I really don't watch the Simpsons

Check first 10 seasons best tv ever made

Album Rating: 2.5

Damn right, old is gold.

1 out of 5, shit was it that bad? I've never reviewed any thrash so that probably didn't help.

Album Rating: 2.5

Watered down Megadeth worship with awful lyrics.

Album Rating: 2.5

Album art is terrible so ...

Album Rating: 3.5

Time is Up >

The bass lines are great.

Lack of cohesion between rhythm and melody.

FPC, Hang 'em High and Ingsoc were really good.



Feel like the review did an average job at covering the album -no rating-

Album Rating: 2.5

disappointed tbh