Eminent
Death of the Pilgrim


4.0
excellent

Review

by Dizchu USER (13 Reviews)
November 1st, 2014 | 9 replies


Release Date: 2010 | Tracklist

Review Summary: A careful balance between complexity and accessibility make "Death of the Pilgrim" an engaging listen.

Self-described "progressive alternative metal" band Eminent occupy an interesting niche. Equally interested in displaying their musical ability and writing actual digestible songs, they eschew the multi-part epics that are all too common in prog. The LA band's balance between accessibility and complexity are what make Death of the Pilgrim an intriguing and rewarding album.

Their particular sound is a fusion of progressive metal, thrash and metalcore, though they mostly avoid the negative aspects of each. Guitar leads dance around upbeat rhythms in a way that ensures that there's always something going on, while the pleasantly melodic vocals reign it all together. A moment is seldom wasted as even the longest song doesn't reach the six-minute mark.

The two most immediate aspects of Death of the Pilgrim are the vocals and the guitar. Bronic Bednarek's voice certainly brings alternative metal to mind, as his soaring clean vocals are powerful yet never become overly theatrical. Many of the songs feature strong choruses with infectious vocal melodies; "Control Your Reckless Mind" possibly being the best example, with multiple interwoven vocal lines complementing each other. Harsher vocals also appear in several songs and though they are not as impressive as the cleans, Bednarek transitions between the two with finesse.

Hovak Alaverdian and Andrew Movsissian handle the guitar duties, their performances ranging from dazzling fretboard gymnastics to pummelling metalcore breakdowns which (thankfully) aren't numerous. The fantastic solos are, however. Opening song "Pilgrimage" features one in its first minute. The guitar work has a certain exotic flavour that is difficult to describe, but prevalent enough to make Death of the Pilgrim's sound distinct. Familiar-sounding harmonised metalcore riffs - such as the one that opens "Incitement" - are featured alongside more sinister, middle eastern-tinged leads such as those found in the excellent album closer, "Transcending".

As if there wasn't enough talent in the band already, bassist Vahe Shahinian's performance is prominent in the mix and gives a seismic low-end to the compositions. His playing isn't flashy but he also doesn't hesitate to add details to the rhythms. Lonny Pasillas' performance on the drums can be described similarly, you won't find distracting blastbeats or fills but instead busy rhythms that fill up the sound quite nicely.

However the album isn't perfect. While full and crisp, the sound is a little compressed. It feels unnecessarily loud and becomes tiring to listen to all the way through. This is exacerbated by another problem; the songs each have the same general mood and don't differ much from each other. There's such a consistent variety within the songs that individual tracks struggle to have their own identity. The vocal melodies also get uncomfortably familiar-sounding and almost overbearing by the end of the album. After the first few tracks you'll know almost exactly what's in store through the rest of the album.

Death of the Pilgrim is a peculiar album that stands out from most others in its genre. It has fantastic musicianship, crisp and clear instruments and great vocals. It makes up for the lack of overall diversity with songs that twist and turn, lacking any real surprises but not being formulaic either. Death of the Pilgrim is an excellent début, let's hope that there'll be further successes in the future.



Recent reviews by this author
Wilderun EpigoneDevin Townsend Lightwork
Anaal Nathrakh EndarkenmentWintersun The Forest Seasons
Neurotech In RemissionWintersun Time I
user ratings (2)
3
good


Comments:Add a Comment 
Dizchu
November 1st 2014


551 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

I promise I'll review something with a rating other than 4.0 eventually...

Jots
Emeritus
November 1st 2014


7562 Comments


Solid review, pos'd. I'll give another read later and offer some feedback if you'd like

Dizchu
November 1st 2014


551 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Thanks! I would appreciate that a lot. I haven't really found my reviewing "style" yet so constructive criticism would be very welcome.

Jots
Emeritus
November 1st 2014


7562 Comments


(see below v, fucking comment edit)

Jots
Emeritus
November 1st 2014


7562 Comments


ok here goes:

- i'd suggest finding a standard for how you use quotation marks. for example (there's no actual correct way, but w/e) I use " " around song titles, italicize album names, use italics and " " around lyrics, and use single quotations to paraphrase. I also italicize to accentuate certain words. everyone does something a bit different, but it makes it easier I think when you set a standard. on that note, I don't get why you put double quotations around "songs" in your first paragraph. this is just super nitpicky stuff btw. doesn't really matter that much, but something to consider maybe.

- as far as the review, it is very well written. however, I think if you're gonna write a lengthier review (not that this is, but it's medium length I guess) I think you could do more than simply lay out what happens on the album in black-and-white. I'm sure you describe it perfectly well (I haven't listened, so idk) but your review doesn't give me a whole lot of incentive to check the band out. the big thing for me is your intro/conclusion. I'm a big fan of reviews that put emphasis on a strong beginning and end - the first thing I read to 'catch my attention', and the last thing I read to 'leave a good impression'. I feel like the way you worded it is pretty standard and doesn't make me compelled to go out of the way to listen to the band, provided I wasn't already a fan of their scene or something. It's one thing if you rate an album 2-3/5, but for a 4 star review, I'd like a bit of enthusiasm to shine through in your writing.

ScuroFantasma
Emeritus
November 1st 2014


12008 Comments


great review, very well written. Johnny gave you some great advice too, definitely take it on board. Only thing I can add is that you might want to make your paragraphs longer (as in maybe break the review up into 3-4 parts instead of 7 smaller ones) only because it interrupts the flow a bit when you have lots of 3-sentence paragraphs. Again though, really good review man.

Dizchu
November 1st 2014


551 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Thanks guys, much appreciated.



I think maybe I should use formatting instead of quotation marks, I was uncertain myself as to how I should use them. I put quotations around "songs" for emphasis (though again, I think italics would have been better). As for not sounding enthusiastic, I consciously try not to sound too excited in my writing BUT... I do understand that I need to make it sound more lively. "Hey guys this band is cool, check them out" should be my tone, not "this is technically impressive and ticks boxes X, Y and Z".



As for the paragraphs, again it was me being too cautious. I've written essays and dissertations with paragraphs that seemingly never end so I get conscious of that. For me it reads better but I might reconsider just for the sake of cohesion.



Great feedback!

Scoot
November 1st 2014


22205 Comments


Eminem?

Dizchu
November 2nd 2014


551 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

""progressive alternative metal"



hahawwuut?"



Their words, not mine haha. I wouldn't call them that myself.



Yes Eminem's much overlooked side-project.



You have to be logged in to post a comment. Login | Create a Profile





STAFF & CONTRIBUTORS // CONTACT US

Bands: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z


Site Copyright 2005-2023 Sputnikmusic.com
All Album Reviews Displayed With Permission of Authors | Terms of Use | Privacy Policy