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Reviews 6 Approval 99%
Soundoffs 98 Album Ratings 2327 Objectivity 85%
Last Active 12-19-21 9:42 pm Joined 02-09-17
Review Comments 2,482
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cylinder
01.24.22 | feel free to adjust your volume accordingly, i ain't the best producer yet. but for a demo i think this sounds pretty decent | combustion07
01.24.22 | I can dig it | DungeonBoy
01.24.22 | Listened to it twice. I like your flow and delivery. The beat is really great. The mix is okay. If you want songwriting critique (just my opinion) I'd scratch the chorus vocals on the intro and just have instrumental, it starts out very abruptly with the vocals. It sounds like you're going for kinda a lazy loose thing with the chorus vox and I think the song will hit better from the get go if you nix them on the intro. Some of the annunciation in the verse is jarring and some if it flows really well, it's kinda a mixed bag, but most of it is really good. I dig it dude, the chorus is a bit weak performance wise but other than that it's really cool | cylinder
01.24.22 | @DungeonBoy
Yeah, you might have a point with the chorus vox at the intro. I just wanted to fill that space somehow, but you're right that it starts pretty abruptly. Might just leave it instrumental. Thanks for the feedback man, it's much appreciated. If you get a chance, I'd like to hear what you think of the other tracks as well | cylinder
01.24.22 | @combustion
cool man, thanks for listening! |
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