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yeah i can see that... it was a lot more awkward originally, ha. since it becomes clear after reading, ill leave it, i suppose. thanks.

mouth-fucked

Your vocabulary doesn't flow, you use a pretty awkward array of words that are concentrated on only certain parts of the review.

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gotta pay the troll tollThis Message Edited On 01.12.09

Well I mean:

A surface value extrusion of aggressive spoken word, El-P’s decidedly unique style is off-putting to some; but this disjointed effort is the essence of ever-present paranoia throughout. Technically skilled, with a penchant for seemingly verbose syntax,

And then the remainder of that paragraph is all chill and not as complex as its first half, which is too wordy anyway.This Message Edited On 01.12.09

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the rest of the paragraph is a quote.

There is a quote, but you didn't put a break between the quote and this:

Although abstract, Meline is a genuine poet; fans of Aesop Rock should adore this style (coincidentally, Aesop also delivers an impressive verse on “Delorean”, as do more Jukie label-mates on other respective tracks).

And then the following paragraph follows suit. It just seems like you were using a thesaurus, then decided to put it down, and then you picked it back up later on to enhance a few sentences. Basically your review is informative but very unbalanced.

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crap i forgot that im actually a bad writer.

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Forgot to mention DJ Abilites... got way too caught up in El-P's production. Derp, i just added a sentence about him.

Review is fantastic. If you think it's too wordy, then maybe try some English 101 or something.

I think you could use some improvement in the reading department as well:

And then the remainder of that paragraph is all chill and not as complex as its first half, which is too wordy anyway.

No reason to be sarcastic buddy.

Album Rating: 4.5

God, Deep Space 9mm is great.

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Yes it is. It was on my baby shower mix cd, but the lady removed it b/c of the "mouthfarked by nazis unconscious" line :[ :[

ugh this is sooo good

idk like a 4, might be a 4.5 soon. i used to listen to this more but i'm now really getting into it and aww yeah.

Album Rating: 4.5

T.O.J is phenomenal.

Album Rating: 4.5

so i listened to this for the first few times ever today: when the first tracks beat hit me i was like "holy shit wtf is this?" but i started listening more and more and got into it. oh shit motherfucker this is the best

iirc i hate this guy's production


and his rapping

Album Rating: 4.5

robertsona, im sorry to say this, but go kill yourself



the rapping is average but the beats are incredible

You gave Drake a 4.5 faggot your opinion is invalid