alienobserver
09.28.16 | i dont know a lot about poetry so i dont know if each stanza being a haiku is a thing but thats what i did lol |
Tyler.
09.28.16 | I've come down with a horrible disease |
alienobserver
09.28.16 | good |
Tyler.
09.28.16 | No you were supposed to ask what the disease was |
beefshoes
09.28.16 | :'( |
KILL
09.28.16 | of aids by the sounds of the poem, fruit |
alienobserver
09.28.16 | ha gay |
SharkTooth
09.28.16 | https://pics.onsizzle.com/Facebook-9a2a43.png |
BallsDeep
09.28.16 | i wont 2 drem |
alienobserver
09.28.16 | "https://pics.onsizzle.com/Facebook-9a2a43.png"
lmao |
BallsDeep
09.28.16 | i feel like theres a chance you just paraphrased the lyrics from the actual album lol but if not then its not too shabby you're a bedroom poet |
TheTripP
09.28.16 | @Tyler what's the disease?
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SandwichBubble
09.28.16 | decent poem, but lol @ "I want to dream" |
iloveyouall
09.28.16 | babe |
Funeralopolis
09.28.16 | cool poem |
tastepolice
09.28.16 | fagass |
Deez
09.28.16 | 'Drive through the pink'
and sometimes through the brown amirite! |
hal1ax
09.29.16 | hi. |
ramon.
09.29.16 | deezer why |
50iL
09.29.16 | Pretty good poem actually. Last line is kinda cheesy and cringey tho lol |
alienobserver
09.29.16 | "Pretty good poem actually. Last line is kinda cheesy and cringey tho lol"
yeah i wasnt sure about that one but i wanted to tie the lyric in somehow |
alienobserver
09.29.16 | "i feel like theres a chance you just paraphrased the lyrics from the actual album lol but if not then its not too shabby you're a bedroom poet"
the theme was basically that yearning and the lust george felt towards a suburban life that he talked about on that one interview or whatever maybe thats why but thank you thank you |
