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William Fitzsimmons
Until When We Are Ghosts


4.5
superb

Review

by luci USER (25 Reviews)
November 1st, 2010 | 12 replies


Release Date: 2005 | Tracklist


A distinguishing feature of singer/songwriter albums is their power to connect listeners with stories personal to the artists. Until When We Are Ghosts is a haunting and affecting work that achieves this goal by recognizing the needs of both the listener and the songwriter.

While some singer/songwriters come off as self-indulgent, singing for themselves, Fitzsimmons is always in dialogue as he pieces through his stories. He sings to a troubled friend on “When You Were Young”, a lost loved one on “My Life Unchanged" and a promising lover on “Forsake All Others.” This allows him to take on the role of the reassuring companion while also granting him the space to be vulnerable and open. His songwriting perfectly plays to this dynamic; the songs each carry a certain message but are loosely structured to allow lengthier moments of lyrical introspection.

The most arresting aspect of Fitzsimmons’ lyrics is their simplicity; he does not lace up his stories with elaborate metaphors but rather presents them with casual directness, furthering the impact of his words. Sentiments such as “just want to be better than my friends might say” and “Mom wants you to come back home, she keeps crying when I call her on the phone” appear as thoughts laid out in conversations, unaffected by the needs of lyricism. This honesty is matched by his breathy drawl, always affected and never complacent. It is loaded with the weight of experience, of troubled feelings and fervent memories. The evocative guitar strums and warm melodies complete the vision of his work.

Fitzsimmons achieves with his debut the rare singer/songwriter album that gives back to the artist just as much as it gives back to the listener. These songs are clearly responses to specific events and specific people, serving as closure and much needed catharsis for Fitzsimmons. But he creates his art in broad strokes, deliberately leaving spaces in his moments of reflection, hoping that the listener will find it in them to fill in the gaps.



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luci
November 1st 2010


12844 Comments


Yes, this is my first review =) .
I would really appreciate feedback and comments. I'm looking forward to writing more.

BigHans
November 1st 2010


30959 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Great album, really good review for your first. I would combine the first two paragraphs but thats just me being nitpicky.

Spec
November 1st 2010


39609 Comments


Good review man. POS.

Gyromania
November 1st 2010


37168 Comments


For future reference, italicize album titles with [ i ] Until When We Are Ghosts [ / i ] Obviously remove the spaces when you do this. I only say that so that it's structurally better and readers don't read it as a literal part of your sentence.

While some singer/songwriters come off as self-indulgent, singing to themselves (or, more aptly, for themselves)

This seems a little fluffy to me. If I were you I think I'd change it to just "While some singer/songwriters come off as self-indulgent, singing for themselves,..."

He sings to a troubled friend on “When You Were Young”, a lost loved one on “My Life Unchanged,” a promising lover on “Forsake All Others.”

This sentence abruptly ends. You should change the ending to 'and a promising lover on "Forsake All Others".

Your third and fourth paragraphs are brilliantly written and fully realized. I didn't think you'd get a review out quite this quickly, after our conversation last night and all, lol. Anyways, you did a fantastic job for your first review, and I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Pos'd.

luci
November 1st 2010


12844 Comments


Was expecting you to reply with some surprise haha. Thanks for the revision, I was uncertain about those sentences. I'll
apply the edits when I get home.

DiceMan
November 1st 2010


7066 Comments

Album Rating: 5.0

Good album good review

EVedder27
November 2nd 2010


6088 Comments


Very nice first review. Album is awesome, especially when you're in a certain mood.

SeaAnemone
November 2nd 2010


21429 Comments


this has been getting a weird amount of hype here I figured it'd get another review soon-- nice ob for a first, especially choosing which one to review

luci
November 2nd 2010


12844 Comments


Double post

luci
November 2nd 2010


12844 Comments


Ob? And I reckon you like this Eric?

SeaAnemone
November 2nd 2010


21429 Comments


*one*

and yeah I could've sworn I had this rated a 4 or 4.5

Voivod
Staff Reviewer
November 2nd 2010


10759 Comments


one of the best reviews i have ever read on Sputnik.

have a pos.

i will check this.



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