There are few albums in recent memory that have been quite so divisive as Donda. Kanye West’s long-teased 10th LP has gone through many iterations and titles, and finally dropped yesterday as a 27-track, almost 2 hour behemoth. Length alone should never be a detractor to one’s critical reception of art – but in this case, the album simply fails to uphold the quality of its strongest moments for that entire duration. That’s really okay, because two hours of superb music is nearly impossible to pull off. In forming a critical analysis of Donda, however, one must take all moments into account – not just its finer cuts – and the results are middling. At its core though, Donda had the potential to be nearly perfect and go toe to toe with My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy as West’s best and most ambitious work. I’m sure this will be done a thousand different ways over the coming weeks, but below is my re-imagined and condensed version of Donda – an iteration that I almost certainly would have hailed as superb or a classic.
I left ‘Jail’ as the opener (we’re not counting ‘Donda Chant’ in this case) because I think it is the ideal adrenaline pumping scene-setter. I’ve heard some complaints already about ‘God Breathed’s early placement with that long outro, but I’m okay with it – it cements Donda as the imaginative and ambitious piece that it is. Most of this re-imagining was just me trimming the church-organ lathered gospel songs, because after a while they collectively dull down the impact of genius moments like the badass banger ‘Heaven and Hell’. I knew from the start that I wanted ‘Jesus Lord’ to be the penultimate track, because it is so powerful lyrically that I wanted it to have close to the “final say” on Donda. It doesn’t quite work as a closer though, and that’s where ‘Come to Life’ plays its role perfectly, stepping in with those gorgeous pianos to usher out the gritty emotions of ‘Jesus Lord’ with grace and elegance. Elsewhere, I kept stronger hip-hop moments like ‘Off The Grid’, ‘Ok Ok’, and ‘Pure Souls’, as well as The Weeknd’s feature on ‘Hurricane’ and the obvious highlight ‘Believe What I Say’. All in all, I think this 10-track cut (still clocking in at an LP-length 50 minutes) makes for the best possible iteration of Donda. I even used one of the alternate versions of artwork, which blows a simple black square out of the water. What do you think? Let me know if this reimagining enhances your enjoyment of Donda. I know it’s how I’ll be listening to it moving forward.
Reimagined Donda Tracklist:
- Jail
- God Breathed
- Off The Grid
- Heaven and Hell
- Ok Ok
- Believe What I Say
- Pure Souls
- Hurricane
- Jesus Lord
- Come to Life
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"Donda" (Ft. Pusha T & The World Famous Tony Williams)
"Moon"(Ft. Don Toliver & Kid Cudi)
"Praise God" (Ft. Baby Keem & Travis Scott)
"I'm Not OK" (Ft. Lil Yachty & Rooga)
"Junya" (Ft. Playboi Carti)
"Jonah" (Ft. Lil Durk & Vory)
"Heaven And Hell"
"Off The Grid" (Ft. Fivio Foreign & Playboi Carti)
"Remote" (Ft. Kid Cudi & Young Thug)
"Donda" (Interlude)
"New Again"
"Pure Souls" (Ft. Roddy Ricch)
"Keep My Spirit Alive" (Ft. Conway the Machine, KayCyy & Westside Gunn)
"Never Abandon Your Family"
"Jesus Lord" (Ft. Jadakiss, Jay Electronica, Rooga & Styles P)
"I Know God Breathed On This" (Ft. Vory)
"Tell The Vision" (Ft. Pop Smoke)
"Jail" (Ft. Francis and the Lights & JAY-Z)
"Lord I Need You Lyrics"
"Hurricane" (Ft. Lil Baby & The Weeknd)
"24" (Ft. Vory)
"No Child Left Behind" (Ft. Vory)
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I don't care if the album is 2 hours long, but when more than half of it is forgettable, that's a problem.
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Honestly I ignored all the Pt.2's after one listen when I realized they were more like reworkings of the same songs than legitimate sequels. Was this a mistake?
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But really, this is your worst take.
I mean, I don't think the final tracklisting does many favors to the song, it immediately following such a strange and out of place sample - when in previous tracklistings it served as a potent moment of table-clearing and catharsis.
But fuck, how that song don't give you goosebumps regardless is beyond me.
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i had zero expectations or conscious BIAS here but Jail and God Breathed are both fascinatingly half-arsed. unironically cut both and put Donda Chant and Praise God on instead
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1. No Child Left Behind (Into)
2. Jail
3. Off The Grid
4. Hurricane
5. Keep My Spirit Alive
6. Remote Control
7. Moon (Interlude)
8. Believe What I Say
9. New Again
10. Pure Souls
11. Come to Life
12. Jesus Lord
13. Donda (Outro)
56 Mins
https://open.spotify.com/playlist/2tYsOTTHUNMvnyUkFiNIum?si=54ba1876b86141f8
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figured i'd share one I came up with. enjoy
1. moon
2. praise god (trimmed intro)
3. off the grid
4. junya part 2
5. Heaven And Hell
6. God Breathed (ends at 3:27)
7. Ok Ok
8. Hurricane
9. Believe What I Say
10. Jail
11. Pure Souls
12. Keep My Spirit Alive
13. Jesus Lord (trimmed intro)
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1. Donda
2. Jail
3. Believe What I Say
4. Hurricane
5. 24
6. Off the Grid
7. Remote Control
8. Wash Us In the Blood*
9. Moon
10. New Again
11. Pure Souls
12. Keep My Spirit Alive
12. Jesus Lord
14. Come to Life
*Obviously not a track from the album, but it's a 2020 single and I think it fits snugly on the album between Remote Control and Moon.
I think Donda as an intro hits hard and sets the theme. Jail is the true opener, and is the best example of his current production style. Believe What I Say as a boppy Graduation/808s throwback. Hurricane as an early slow jam capped nicely by the feel-good 24. Then tracks 6 - 8 as a solid run of harder/darker tracks (including Wash Us in the Blood). Moon as a mid-album interlude/reset. 10-12 as a melodic/gospel run of tracks building up to the one-two punch of Jesus Lord and Come to Life as the epic closer.
Link: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/0wwmRnMOwz4qITIlkjqwnY?si=235b8a67e7d84207
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but yh, Jesus Lord / Off the Grid / Moon / Ok Ok / Believe What I Say EP plz
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2. God Breathed
3. Off The Grid
4. Hurricane
5. Praise God
6. 24
7. Moon
8. Heaven and Hell
9. Jesus Lord
10. New Again
11. Come To Life
12. Come To Life
DIS IS THE TRACKLIST. IF U DISAGREE DEN U WRONG.
source: ive got better taste than u nd i scrobbled dis more 😎