[B][I][U]Light Fantastic[/U][/I][/B]
[B][I][U]SubtleDagger[/U][/I][/B]

oh wait

On a related note, I'd like to point out that songwriting is very difficult.

only if you suck at it

ahemtojesahem

Yeah I know, unfortunately.

Me to.

i'm amazing

oh well we can't all be imperfect

yeah truth, how are you so amazing?

His ego covers that section of the brain that tells you your material isn't always quite right.

Oic

Haha.. Torched!

Me or elim?

[B][U][I]kittensonatree[/I][/U][/B]

[b][i][u]kittensonatra[/b][/u][/i]

eliminator

So Burton is supporting what he used to struggle with back in the day.

=o

Times to come. =o

Crit my song pls :)
When your ready

I'm on here every day, even though I don't post. Me for mod!

[B][I][U]A_Perfect_Sonnet[/U][/I][/B]

Hmmmm I dunno. Better without the _ i think.
APS for mod!

[U][I][B]TojesDoLan[/B][/I][/U]

and for true.

[QUOTE=Migraines;13718415]Does anyone know why Eleventeen got banned?[/QUOTE]

I hijacked an illegal thread in R&M to hit on another dude.

So yeah, spam.

[B][I][U]Nightvision[/U][/I][/B]

I don't even post as much as I used to, so I'm halfway to becoming a mod anyway.

Failing that,
[B][I][U]Psychotronn[/U][/I][/B]

You know it makes sense.

[QUOTE][B][i][U]wartree[/U][/i][/B][/QUOTE]

Best idea ever.

Gaah!! I'm back guys...and I seem to have missed ALL the action!

So Sloth plagiarised and Burt's stepped down as Mod...

Burt, you better stay around, this place won't be the same without you!!


But yeah, sorry I haven't been around in what has probably been months. I've been through a total stinker of a time what with compelte loss of inspiration and willpower to write, and also so much schoolwork at points I felt like I was literally drowning in the stuff.

But it's all starting to slacken off, and today I went to 'Poetry Live' with school. Basically we met a load of the poets that we have been studying for our GCSE course. Some of it was complete rubbish, other parts were legendary (John Agard and Simon Armitage were fantastic).

So yeah, those two guys have inspired me to get back to my notepad and pull it all together again. So yeah, it's now critique time, and also tonight I am going to write until I get something worth writing.

Hope you're all ok and still writing!! I look forward to getting to know you all again!!

[I][B][U]Drumass04[/U][/B][/I]

Doesn't really suit me does it? ;p

Timmy

:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

Hey Tim. Could check my thingy on the second page? Don't need to crit it, just have a little look...

Vote Tojes, I'll give you candy.

What kind of candy?

And Tim: thanks for the crit man, i was only after like a few words in here or something, but that's great. I'll get yours in the morning.

I dunno, what kind of candy would you want to get for voting Tojes?

I'm easily bribed, so pretty much any kind...

No probs Surf...I'm gonna try get back into this critique business! Hopefully I'll get back to the good ol' 1500 word essays on the pieces that are worth it!

I tried writing...it felt so good, but I'm so ridiculously out of practice! Not a single phrase was worth more than an oxidised two pence piece :(

But hey, I WILL get back into it! And hopefully I can start writing and crit'ing a little more.

Timmy

Tojes man, you need a chupacabra or something...that way, you'll command respect then and people won't be able to argue :thumb:

No worries Tim, we know how real life can be so engaging at times. :)

And Eleventeen you silly man you. :)

Well I think being a nice person is a lot more handy than being a total a[size=2]s[/size]s to people. Especially those literally-ridden ones. =o

Haha, no prob bro.