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User
Reviews 5
Approval 50%
Soundoffs 2
Album Ratings 39
Objectivity 72%
Last Active 04-11-11 10:39 pm
Joined 10-28-10
Review Comments 21
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 | Gnocchi -y improved. As with butchered's scraping advice we do that occasionally if we feel some reviews are up to standard. he himself has permd two i know of and my self one. You can always re-write them later.
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| Gnocchi Don't worry about the neggers dude, they come in and out of your reviews, for example my A7X-nightmare review copped it heavy, it starts to go away when you learn what works in a review. Another tip i can give you is if you review something well known/ or with a high love/hate ratio chances are you will receive more feedback occasionally resulting in more hate/negs on your reviews, i keep my reviews to the less known stuff and i won't tackle anything too big until i know my writing has definitel
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 | ButcheredChildren There's more but I don't have enough room to state everything else. I suggest asking the mod's to just scrap the review and taking a writing class. You need to seriously work on clearly conveying your opinion about something in particular, rather than in general.
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| ButcheredChildren 1) To many rhetorical questions, it sounds like you are trying to sell something.2) You used way to many writing schemes, your review is more like a speech or an advertisement.3) Way to much swearing, if you want to be a writer you have to appear to be intelligent and use real words, not slang.4) No using contractions5) Your arguments are okay but you did not convey the fact that this album is bad, you merely stated all the things "you" hate about Brain Drill's music in general.
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